New Story “TORN”

October 30th, 2009 at 4:46 pm by under Uncategorized

Ok guys sooo I don’t want to do the scary story anymore, because lately my mind has been playing tricks on me. I do believe in evil spirits, so I’ll stay away from that story for a while..

But here’s a new story, I wrote this a LONG time ago, so are you ready?? I’ll post a new page every Friday.  This story is called “Torn” by Sharia Davis..

Chapter 1: The Wedding

Finally it’s my wedding day.  I never thought this day would happen and I never thought I would be this nervous, I hope I’m doing the right thing.  I checked my reflection in the mirror, making sure everything fit just the way it was supposed to. The pure silk of the gown enhanced my complexion perfectly, its flattering pearl-scattered cowl neck flowing round to a v-shaped back. The pearl bodice was cut across my chest giving a seductive hint at the bounty they concealed, the capped sleeves flowed in smooth folds down my arms where they tapered off into my kid skin gloves. The body of the dress ran in smooth lines down my body, hugging in just the right places, no one would be able to tell just by looking that I had to send it back three times for alterations, which was risky on its own since it was a classic Christiana Couture shipped specially from England.

“Lee you look beautiful,” my best friend noticed.

“Thanks Paula.”

I can always trust Paula’s opinions.  She’s always blatantly honest with them and never seems to censor them, which at times is a blessing and curse. We’ve been good friends since high school, being a couple of months older than I am, her appearance would suggest otherwise. Married with four little ones of her own, she has a spunk and personality that’s rife with humor. I suppose it has to be given the man she’s married to.

“Lee, see I told you it would happen and you never believed me.  Remember, patience is a virtue,” she said with a smirk, while fastening her bridesmaid dress.

I smiled at her humor.

“I’m glad you finally came around on the dress,” I said looking at her in the mirror.

Paula looked down at herself and grimaced.

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That’s it.. see ya next week!

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